The Wedding

With the wedding being only round the corner, Shiloh was beginning to panic, worrying that something bad would happen and the wedding would be called off, or her dress wouldn't arrive in time, all these things buzzing through were buzzing through her mind, making her more paranoid than ever. Lily of course, had done this before, and was confident that everything was going to be fine.
"Shiloh, stop worrying, you dress will turn up soon, i promise" Lily tried to comfort the rmess that Shiloh was, as she started to panic about her dress,
"Oh don't be stupid Lily! MY DRESS WON'T TURN UP AND I'LL HAVE TO GO IN A BIN BAG, AND EVERYTHING WILL BE RUINED, YOU'LL CALL OFF THE WEDDING AND GO OFF WITH A YOUNGER VERSION OF ME, AND YOU'LL KICK ME OUT AND I'LL LIVE ON THE STREETS IN MY BIN BAG WEDDING DRESS"  Lily knew that Shiloh was being serious, but she couldn't help but burst into laughter, Shiloh burst into tears and collapsed in Lily's arms,
"I just love you too much for this to go wrong" she wept, Lily held Shiloh at arms length, and smiled, she didn't say anything to her, she just looked her in the eyes, that's when Shiloh knew everything was going to be okay, Lily kissed her, wiping the tears off her cheeks, and went to make dinner.

Days had past and finally the big day was here,

"Good morning" Shiloh murmured, her eyes still closed,
"Today's the big daay" Lily sang, her voice croaky and cracked, Shiloh smiled as she heard the excitement in Lily's voice,
"You're so cute in the morning" Shiloh whispered, kissing her cheek, before pulling herself out of bed, and walking to the bathroom,
"That reminds me" Lily mumbled sleepily, "I have to leave soon" Shiloh popped her head out of the bathroom as she brushed her teeth,
"Why?" Shiloh asked, sounding almost upset,
"So i can get ready silly, and besides, the weddings at six and you'll see me then" she said, patting the creases out of her yellow summer dress, Shiloh smiled, she remembered that little flower girl from high school, the way she would smile and the way her hair would waft in the wind, the sweet, summery smell of her perfume would dance down the corridors, leaving Shiloh breathless.
"What's up" Lily asked, looking up from what she was doing,
"Nothing" Shiloh said dreamily, shaking her head and doing her make-up,
"Oh Bonnie's here!" Lily sang as she looked out of the window, she quickly kissed Shiloh on the cheek, before hurrying off to the car.

So urm, what do you think? I'm wanting to write some kind of legacy type thing, but i wanted to see peoples reaction first, so i can get there opinions first, well I hoped you enjoyed!
Chow!